Friday, February 4, 2011
Rhetorical Analysis Thesis
"Put Your Money Where Their Mouths Are" uses starling statistics, anecdotes, and first hand experiences as an effective argument to convince over eager middle class citizens to put an end to the underlying issues of poverty and below par education in third world countries before outlawing the child labor that result from it.
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Wow, this is great! Its definitely a strong thesis. Good job!
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Good thesis! The ending seems a bit cluttered with a lot of important information though. You could try following the outline laid out on blackboard a little more closely and that would probably help!
ReplyDeleteVery clear and easy to follow. Anecdotes and personal stories could be grouped in the same category depending on how you approach them so be careful to distinctly separate the two or combine them and add another strategy. Best of luck!
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